First Full Draft Piece

I have put together one full sequence from start to finish with all of the effects and music. I wanted to do this to make sure that the edit was still right and to get a full view of everything I have. There are a few things that don't work properly, things I didn't notice when playing them through in After Effects, this is because it is difficult to get a smooth play through in After Effects. I have made notes on what needs tweaking in each shot and will do this tomorrow.